Friday, February 6, 2009

Patricia Ferrara, "Rising Waters"

from The Magazine of Science Fiction and Fantasy, January, 2009.

A boy. A lake. A submerged house.

It's supposed to be scary. It confused me. Couldn't wrap my head around the submerged house thing and why the boy can't swim away. Long paragraphs of narration with little dialogue didn't help me. I likes my dialogue.

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